To Serve Man

by Ben Paddon

The kettle begins to whistle, and before the sound has a chance to pick up any real volume the droid lifts it off the small gas heater and pours hot water into the teacup, then uses the remaining contents to fill up a hot water bottle. It stirs the contents of the teacup, then carefully picks it up in one hand, takes the hot water bottle in the other, and wanders out of the kitchen, down the long dark hall, towards the lounge.

The glow of the roaring fireplace illuminates the room. The power had been cut long ago, but its master hadn’t objected. It walks to the chair where his master lays, places the hot water bottle under the blanket, then sets down the teacup, and takes away the old cup which is still full of what is now very cold tea.

It then carries on with its duties – mopping floors, cleaning surfaces, and scrubbing a bath its master hasn’t used in weeks. It is, after all, only fulfilling its primary function. It doesn’t occur to the simple thing that its master will not be getting up again.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. To Serve Man

    Blondie Babe's Buddy Icon Blondie Babe

    Posted 9 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    that was dire

  2. To Serve Man

    Blondie Babe's Buddy Icon Blondie Babe

    Posted 9 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah….........

  3. To Serve Man

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I disagree. It has been done before, but it was well written.
    Rather sad, though. But it’s coldly written, as the tale of a robot should be.

  4. To Serve Man

    Ben Paddon's Buddy Icon Ben Paddon

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Just ignore Blondie Babe, she has something of a vendetta against me because I said her magnum opus, the brilliantly written and superbly plotted “hi”, was not a good ficlet.

  5. To Serve Man

    Ben Paddon's Buddy Icon Ben Paddon

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoops, didn’t mean to rate my own story…!

  6. To Serve Man

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nicely done!
    good thing robots can’t smell… :)
    shouldn’t its battery run low soon…

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    EmpathicCelt's Buddy Icon EmpathicCelt

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I always enjoy your writing Ben, I can’t wait to see what tomorrow’s offering will be!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Great details here. There was a ficlet written by Jenunique, I believe, that was very similar to this one. Like hers, this reminds me of Raymond Chandler’s short story about the technologically advanced house that continues to do its work even after its inhabitants have been obliterated.

  9. To Serve Man

    dewinduvae's Buddy Icon dewinduvae

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    gotta love the flow.

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    genderbunny's Buddy Icon genderbunny

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice. There’s a joke about “Three Laws Safeā„¢” in there somewhere, I’m sure of it.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    There’s a creepy appeal to this, just because it’s about robots. I like it!

    LoA

  12. To Serve Man

    Snarky's Buddy Icon Snarky

    Posted 8 months ago

    sweet. I love the tone.

  13. To Serve Man

    Mr Reeses 's Buddy Icon Mr Reeses

    Posted 8 months ago

    Very nice

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