Maybe If

by Terminus

I was thinking the other day,
When a woman steals my heart,
She’s not a woman, but a girl

I’ve never heard,
“I met the cutest woman today,”
Only
“The cutest girl.”

Because I know that men are never more than little boys
When he’s walking up to a woman’s door
He rings the bells and holds out the flowers

Maybe if she opened her eyes
She would see a little boy
Drooping flower held in closed fist
At arms length
Eyes squeezed shut, face wrinkled and mouth pursed

If she opened her eyes
Her left ankle would curl behind and around
Her right ankle
Suddenly shy, her body would twist away
And then twist back

If she opened her eyes
She would know what to do
In this situation

Maybe she would step past
His clenched fist
Past his outstretched arm and bedraggled flower
And, no longer shy,
Kiss him
Feeling his pursed lips widen
Into a broad smile

But maybe she wouldn’t open her eyes
And all she would see
Would be a tall man with a bouquet of roses,
Confident and collected

And wonder what to do

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Maybe If

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 10 months ago

    Sweet depiction of a moment. My favorite part:
    “Maybe she would step past
    His clenched fist
    Past his outstretched arm
    And, no longer shy,
    Kiss him
    Feeling his pursed lips widen
    Into a broad smile”

  2. Maybe If

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cute moment, and I like the pseudo-poem style to it (just meaning the non-rhyming aspect).

    LoA

  3. Maybe If

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    this is really sweet!
    great job=]

  4. Maybe If

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You used my favorite word. bedgraggled!

    A sweet story or young love/dating.

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