Beyond The Open Window

by Leave Me A Note

“Keep up!” I yelled. My brother and I decided to take a walk in the forest.
“Hi,” he said.
“Listen, I have no time for your stupid games, okay?” He wasn’t listening, but looking straight ahead. “Okay?” I said even louder. He pointed his finger straight forward and said, “Look, Sydney.”
Strangely, I did what he said and looked. It was a house, small and deteriorated. He started running toward the house but I caught him right in time. “I wanna see the house!” he screamed. But I wasn’t listening. I was focused on my thoughts.
Suddenly, I was in a trance I started moving forward, my eyes locked on the house.I put Jeffery down and kept walking.I walked to the window at the side of the house and looked in.
It was like a reflection,but its wasn’t me who was staring back.It was a small girl,pale and weak.I couldn’t move away tho my body froze.She stared at me and It was like I could read her mind. Help, she was saying.I wanted to help and I reached out my hand and never came back.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Beyond The Open Window

    Blossom Ruoqen's Buddy Icon Blossom Ruoqen

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ooo shivers
    creepy ending >.<
    Slight Spelling mistakes, nothing bad though.
    very cool picture.
    (guess who wants to live there?) :D tee hee

  2. Beyond The Open Window

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 9 months ago

    eerie…

  3. Beyond The Open Window

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this it has a Hitch Cock kinda vibe to it. Great job.

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