Promises

by someday_93

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“Lily, are you sure…” Anna’s voice trailed off.

“I need to, Anna. Please.” Lily grabbed the phone, put it up to her ear. “Hello?”

“Lily! Baby! Oh, babe, I am so sorry! I didn’t mean it, you know I didn’t mean it, it’ll never happen again, I promise!”

Promise. So many promises he’d made to her, so many promises broken. Yet, so much of her wanted to go back to him. Just to have what they had in the beginning. The love, the tenderness.

Anna yanked the phone from her hand. “She doesn’t need you, you jerk! She doesn’t want you either! So, get lost!”

“Anna, no,” Lily whispered, taking the phone back. “I’m sorry. Anna’s just…overexcited. Sorry.”

“So…do you forgive me, Lily of the Valley?”

The familiar nickname, the one he’d given to her long ago, sent a warm feeling through her. Maybe he’d be different this time.

“You know I’d never hurt you!”

But you did, she thought. You did.

“Please?”

“I—” Lily’s voice caught in her throat. “I don’t know.”

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    THANK YOU FOR WRITING A SEQUEL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I really needed that. Oh, this is so sad. I love your writing. You are fantastic and I love how you take the time to comment on other’s ficlets. This series just sucks me in (recently I wrote a ficlet on abuse too-One’s Regrets-) and please, please keep on writing sequels.

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very good someday. I have to agree with daydreaming you are fantastic =)

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awesome sequel!
    I bet if I wrote a sequel to this I would change your motive so I’m just going to let it be.

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    now that I read the story this is a part!
    what will she choose?
    best story!

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    i already told u ur awesome, so i won’t repeat myself.
    ~
    oh! a sequel! i’m off..

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