The First One

by Flute Loop<33

“Oh my!” she had said, “I’m SO sorry, I’ll go get something to clean that up!”

“NO!” he screamed at her, “You shouldn’t have dropped it in the first place you klutz! What is wrong with you?”

The words had hit Lily like a ton of bricks. She was stunned, up to this point he had been the perfect boyfriend, all of sudden, when they were alone, he changed completely.

Thats when it happened. The first punch. She thought it had been all her fault, that she shouldn’t had spilled that drink on him, that she was a klutz and nothing more.

So after he had gone home, she kept everything to herself, not telling anyone anything. That is also when she stopped wearing short sleve shirts.

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Lily figured she should go back to class. It had been an hour, and she was all cried out. So Lily took one last look in the mirror making sure she was presentable, told herself she was pitiful and walked out the door.

“Well it’s about time.” Mr. G said as she walked out the door.

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  1. The First One

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg!
    ..Mr. G knows all [worship]

  2. The First One

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    there’s no hiding it now!

  3. The First One

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love all the flashbacks…that’s great.
    ~
    Line 2, paragraph 4: “Klutz” starts with a K. Sorry, I’m a spelling freak.

  4. The First One

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    go My. G!

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