How (NOT) to Fall off the Edge of a Building

by uselessness

A gun fires, and you’re sure you’re dead. The sound of the blast alone is enough to make you lose your footing, but you know you’ll be in a better place before you hit the pavement.

You’ve come so far, so very very far. But you’re teetering now, your body already committed to falling into the arms of karma. And there’s quite possibly a bullet in your brain.

Another gunshot. A yelp. The sound of fist against face. You whirl around on one foot, staggering backwards, and find Harris doubled over, blood streaming from his nose, and his band of FBI cronies laid out cold around him. Rushing toward you is Max, eyes like baseballs. In slow motion he grabs your hand and yanks you back to the safety of the rooftop. You collapse and instinctively reach for the back of your head.

It’s intact. You’re alive.

“Cutting it a little close, don’t you think, Max?”

“Closer than the parking lot, anyway.”

“That’s true. How’d you find me?”

“Let’s just say these particular agents ain’t too good at covering their tracks.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. How (NOT) to Fall off the Edge of a Building

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 10 months ago

    Nice! So much good imagery (“eyes like baseballs”), and I love the zen-like perspective on whether or not there happens to be a bullet in the brain or not. Very faithful to the voice I imagined for whoever this guy is. Great sequel!

  2. How (NOT) to Fall off the Edge of a Building

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nice sequel!

  3. How (NOT) to Fall off the Edge of a Building

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 10 months ago

    Lovely.

    LoA

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