A Bowl of Fruit

by Snarky

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Bowl of Fruit

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Absolutely lovely. I’m not usually a fan of vampire stories, but this is definitely a great exception.

    I’d love to see you write more, in this or other things.

  2. A Bowl of Fruit

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Excellent!

  3. A Bowl of Fruit

    Snarky's Buddy Icon Snarky

    Posted 10 months ago

    hmmmmm, more of this? I’ll work on it. If they arent rubbish, I might even post them.

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    Tears of Phoenix's Buddy Icon Tears of Phoenix

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It’s… unusual, but in a good way. Too many vampire stories go all dark and gloomy. This one seems (dare I say it) whimsical. A vampire that cares about his prey, even if only to improve the taste. Makes it a little creepier too, though, that the people really don’t know a thing till they get eaten. I would love to see more!

  5. A Bowl of Fruit

    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 8 months ago

    I like this one. I really don’t like vampire stories, but the focus is more on their psychological, seductive nature. Pretty good.

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