The Number Before Death

by One Time, One Chance

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The instance I felt the car stop, I bounded into the hospital and towards the secretary, who was watching me oddly. “What room is Chad in?”

She scrunched her eyebrows and pulled out a clipboard with a list of names and their room numbers on it. “Chad who?”

“Chad Whosyourmomma.” I said out of repitition. That’s the name he would always refer to himself as. “Chad Trenta.”

“Room 665.”

My mom was taking her good old time coming in, so she can ask for the number herself, I’m not going to wait for her. I headed over to the elevator and checked the sheet they had posted – he was on the third floor.

I pressed the up button and waited for it to come. Floor 7.. 6.. 5.. 4.. 3!! 2.. 1. It was finally here. The doors slid open, I walked in, pressed 3 and every number above it, and leaned against the walls. Minutes felt like hours as I watched the first floor disappear between the elevator doors going in slow motion.

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  1. The Number Before Death

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 10 months ago

    Yaaaaaaa! stupid Chad!!!!!!!

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    AH!! i can’t wait untill she sees Chad!!

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You absolutely must sequel this riiiiiiiiiiiiight away! You can’t leave it hanging now! I can’t believe he commited suicide…..................................................

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg i really need the next one!!!!!!

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    i’m so mad. i wrote a sequel to this and then my internet died. i was soo mad.

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg. g2g read the next one…. :p

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh! I can’t wait till she sees him either, bandbaby! This is really good, the whole “I don’t care, just get me there now” thing, like you’re not even really thinking anymore…
    LoA

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