Crime Scene Inadequacy

by White Hat

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Crime Scene Inadequacy

    KasumiRose's Buddy Icon KasumiRose

    Posted 6 months ago

    Nicely done. You’ve set up the situation immensely well. I was cringing at the gruesome stuff and laughing at the amusing stuff.

  2. Crime Scene Inadequacy

    Leaky fountain pencil's Buddy Icon Leaky fountain pencil

    Posted 6 months ago

    Nice… but what kind of accent is that? It’s kind of confused.

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