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An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)

“He said, do you want to be my partner? And it was so amazing. I mean, it’s so obvious he likes me!”
They all stared at her with her perfect things and wished for once, something wouldn’t be perfect for her.

“Andrea, that’s great! Will he ask you out?”
They all felt bad for her friends, her best friend mostly, who had to listen to her drone on 24/7 about her wonderful, perfect life.

“Well, obviously Bella. Who else is he going to ask out? You?”
And she cackled her perfect laugh while they all sat, admiring and hating.

“Who’s going to ask out who? What are you guys talking about?”
And there he was, the other perfect, the only one she admired, her crush.

“Oh, heyyy David! How are you? So, completely random, but, who do you like?

“Well, I don’t really want to say, the person is kind of nearby.”

“Come on, tell!”

“Fine, fine; I like…Bella.”

A collective gasp; Andrea’s face fell. Her life was not so perfect. And as Bella looked up, it was omniscient, a new reign had begun.

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An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
Dr. Mousse
Posted 8 months ago

Sorry, it’s not so good. I kept running out of room, and there was so much I wanted to put in it. I tried!
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
emma jo_234
Posted 8 months ago

wow would that be awkward!

I know girls like Andrea and I’m not proud to say that I would feel kind of triumphant if something like that happened to them. Only for a second, of course. ;]

Nice job. I hope you do well!
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
SocccerISmyLIFE
Posted 8 months ago

wow That does sound very awkward. lol thats actually happened to me before. I hate girls like Andrea so I’m glad to see her fall….
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
Melody
Posted 8 months ago

Good story I can relate to.
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unknown and not discovered....
Posted 8 months ago

haa haaa haa ha ha. I love bella.
already, even tho this is only one story. I love her already. HHAAAAA . :p
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
Blusparrow
Posted 8 months ago

I think its good!
5 stars!
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
yoITSme
Posted 8 months ago

unperfect isn’t a word. it should be inperfect. k otherwise pretty good
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flute faerie
Posted 8 months ago

Awesome! I love this already!
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One Time, One Chance
Posted 7 months ago

lolol that is soo awkward=]
An Imperfect Moment (SoccerISmyLIFE's challenge)
emma jo_234
Posted 6 months ago

not to be patronizing, yoITSme, but it’s _im_perfect.
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Blossom Ruoqen
Posted 5 months ago

lol. i have nothing to say about that ^ i think a make up fantasmagoric words all the time :P tee hee. The story was a CLASSIC ! Downfall of the snob! perfecto!

~Blossom