spring cleaning :}

by the Raven

the true blue coo’s and it’s up to you. what to make of the life that’s made itself lose. what do you do when your time is up? take down the curtains and hang up the dust. it’s time to quit the good ol’ days. they take the time you couldn’t make. it doesn’t start when it should end. let’s not fight let’s just pretend. it isn’t over so don’t even try. make it end and make it fly. by the by you don’t seem to see. you know what it is i want to be. tell me before i lose my mind. it takes me up and spits me dry. what in hell does god’s name hath? he takes it all when i want it back. it isn’t good it isn’t right, when i wanted peace, “let there be light”. in day i dost take thy own self. what have you there upon the shelf? it takes me out and puts you in. when to where to why begin? it shouldn’t sting we’ll put it back. it takes the name and makes the shaft. it shant be there when all is gone. what is left when you have long? to remember the end is near. when all you have you now hold dear.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. spring cleaning :}

    Snarky's Buddy Icon Snarky

    Posted 10 months ago

    I love the rythm! I also like the rambling style.

  2. spring cleaning :}

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Couldn’t get into it myself. Either too random, or I just didn’t get the theme.

    LoA

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