The Promise 3

by Unwritten

The seconds count down like rainfall from an endless grey sky.
It’s not enough. There’s never enough.
I could spend a lifetime lost in this sweet embrace-
An eternity counting the gentle beats of your tender heart
As it lay softly pressed against mine.
I could spend forever in this moment,
And still it would not be enough.
I held you in my arms with a kiss gently placed against your ear-
Not having the strength to look into your sad sullen eyes-
And whispered, with slow quivering lips:
“Two years. Here. Again, in two years.”
...
Like fingertips tracing an unseen path down the side of my face,
I felt your tears.
The words you spoke barely audible,
But so filled with pain and heartache:
“Promise. Promise me.”
And so I did.
And so it was,
My last gift to you,
A promise.

Do you remember?

Comments

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  1. The Promise 3

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh…did they come back? In two years? These are beautiful, they nearly made me cry!
    LoA

  2. The Promise 3

    KasumiRose's Buddy Icon KasumiRose

    Posted 7 months ago

    This is all so sweet and emotional. Please say they reunite?

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