Into the Light

by FlirtingWithaBrickWall

Why’s it so bright in here? So bright I can’t see anything- what an oxymoron. How did I get here? Oh man, what was I doing last night?

Last night… or morning? Afternoon? It’s so bright, I think it’s day, but I can’t see a thing. Maybe I should focus on figuring out where I am first…

Why can’t I move? My brain’s operating at full speed, but nothing’s leaving it. Am I paralyzed? Oh boy, I’m paralyzed, now I’m never going to get married. I’m going to die a virgin.

Focus! Last thing I remember… Rode to Cory’s party with Claire, drank a bit, felt sick… then what? I was ready to leave, Claire wasn’t, so I left the car and started to walk home. It was dark, and the streetlights were off… “Hey baby,” even tipsy, that sounded like a threat… I resisted, and then… Pain. Did he hit me? If he hit my head, maybe I’m not paralyzed, maybe I’m dead. I don’t think the white light’s supposed to last this long. What’s left? Hit on the hea-

Oh no.

Coma

I’m a hostage in my head.

Comments

  1. Into the Light

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    [shudder]

    Good.

  2. Into the Light

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It’s weird to say he’s lucky, but having thoughts in a coma kinda gives me the feeling that he’ll recover. I didn’t know until the end what was really going on so good suspense.

  3. Into the Light

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah, I agree with Tad, the thoughts in the coma make it seem sort of hopeful, but then I guess we really don’t know if people really think in a coma at all…I really like this, though, really nice writing. I love the line, So bright I can’t see anything- what an oxymoron. That’s awesome.
    LoA

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