Forty-one Hours After

by Blossom Ruoqen

Would you be happy if you knew that everyone here is reading your favorite books out loud?

That there are candles all over the house, and your room smells like coconuts?

Would you be happy if you knew your body wasn’t disfigured in the accident?

And that your room is finally clean?

I know all you wanted was for our family to get along, for our mother to talk to our Uncle Charlie.

Well, you did it.
Everyone’s here at our house.

Everyone loves you.

My dearest Sister

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Forty-one Hours After

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 6 months ago

    I am so sorry. I’ve read a lot of pieces about this girl and she must have been really special, and what a great way to honor her memory.
    LoA

  2. Forty-one Hours After

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love ya, my dearie. Yes, love is what all of us feel.

  3. Forty-one Hours After

    Blossom Ruoqen's Buddy Icon Blossom Ruoqen

    Posted 6 months ago

    She was very special. I used to read her all my ficlets to see if she liked them, so, I figured this would be good.

  4. Forty-one Hours After

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hi honey, it’s Bri-on’s mom.

    This is absolutely beautiful, you did a wonderful job and knowing OE the way I did, I know you know the answers to the questions are… YES , YES, YES and YES . It shows how in tune you were with OE and how your hearts connected. All your efforts and the attention to details in preparing for her Memorial shows that and how much you love her.

    I Love you, Honey,
    My daughter of the heart

  5. Forty-one Hours After

    Heygabe's Buddy Icon Heygabe

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t know you or the person in the story, but I enjoyed reading this ficlet very much.

  6. Forty-one Hours After

    User 7861's Buddy Icon User 7861

    Posted 4 months ago

    Your writings break my heart.

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