Dirt and Love

by someday_93

You know those days when everything seems to be going wrong, but nothing specific that you can really put your finger on? Yeah. It was one of those days.

The rubber soles of my sneakers scraped the sidewalk, my backpack bouncing uncomfortably against my spine. I just needed to get home, have a good cry, curl up under the covers for a while.

Mel, my best friend, was walking with me. Or rather, ahead of me. Every few steps, she’d turn, look back. “Come on!” But my eyes were on the ground.

My foot kicked what should have been the strip of grass between the sidewalk and street, but was really the strip of dirt. Rocks, a brave plant or two…and a headless Barbie doll. “Eew, what’s that?” Mel asked.

I picked it up, cradled it in my palm.

“That’s so dirty! It could have been in tons of little kids’ mouthes! It’s been lying in dirt! It belongs in the trash.”

But, being me, I didn’t put it down. “No,” I whispered. “It just needs love.”

Because that Barbie doll, I think it looked just like me.

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awww. Do you even know how many times I have felt like that, and have had a friend there exactly like Mel?? That is so bittersweet. Fantastic job. Your writing pretty much rules.

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    insomniac's Buddy Icon insomniac

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’ve felt like that countless times. Awesome.
    LoA

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    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted 7 months ago

    sad. I really feel the emotion of this piece

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    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 7 months ago

    I really like your writings, they are so involved,great job.

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    everyone does need love! what a great story!

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hahahha.. nvm. i was going to say something but almost everybody would take it the wrong way. i guess i’ll tell you later.=D
    ~
    DIRTY LOVE ! there i said it.
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    this was great! i wonder how that barbie lost it’s head? ..actually i’d rather not know. nvm.

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    amazing amazing amazing. i love you. i’ve felt like that… your writing is awesome.

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