Drowning

by IheartSoccer x10

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I see you every day,
walking without knowing,
that your more than just a person to me.
You think I don’t notice,
how your eyes sparkle in the light.
How your smile aways makes me tingle inside.
That it kills me to watch,
as you flirt back with that bitchy cheerleader.
I wish you could know,
how much brighter my day becomes,
everytime I see your beautiful face.
I wish you could know,
I’m slowly dying as each day passes without you in it.
I wish you could know,
that I’m drowning in this ocean,
waiting for you to come and scoop me into your arms.
Without you,
I’m drowning.
All I need is for you to open your eyes,
and come save me.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Drowning

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Without you,
    I’m drowning.
    All I need is for you to open your eyes,
    and come save me.
    I love that, that’s an awesome ending.
    LoA

  2. Drowning

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sometimes i wish a guy would save me, others i think that life is better without them, oh well, nice ficlet.

  3. Drowning

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow very romantic longing story.

  4. Drowning

    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg! Wonderful… simply stunning

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