Without you

by writeAlot

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Starting over.

That’s all I can do.

A new road ahead.

The future looks bright.

I keep my eyes off of you, I just look straight ahead.

My life is better… without you…

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Without you

    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted 8 months ago

    great I’m glad! I’m sooo glad u got over it! U forgot 2 sequel this one to your others BTW . This one isnt as good as your others either…

  2. Without you

    writeAlot's Buddy Icon writeAlot

    Posted 8 months ago

    this one isn’t part of my other series, so it wouldn’t make sense to sequel it.

  3. Without you

    JohnnysGiRL's Buddy Icon JohnnysGiRL

    Posted 8 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    It kind of reminds me of the song Without You from RENT . At the end where it says “My life is better… without you…” When you write it like that are implying that you aren’t sure if your life is better or was that just the way you wanted to write it?

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