Sounds like a zoo?

Wow… very dreamlike. Did you really have this dream or did you make it up?

Really was a dream, I swear. Seemed like a primitive mud hut or something. Who knows, but it worked for the challenge.

Works as poetry also, I was struck by its potential for becoming an allegory (if it isn’t already). I wonder what it could mean, very interesting dream.
—Lone Awesomebre

Interesting dream. You did a great job of bringing out that not-quite-sure-that-this-could-exist-in-reality quality of dreams.

Dreamlike and surreal. It feels a bit like a criticism towards the modern world…we all wait for someone else to spark a change.

wow, definately very weird dreamlike. Almost seems like there could be something symbolic behind it… or you ate some funny pasta that night. Either way, good job describing it in a ficlet. I loved the second sentence. I was definately not expecting that lol.

Whoa, wicked cool dream.

This is cool. I want to analyse it!

Absolutely adore!

Interesting. It’s symbolizing…. Kind of real life, how the feelings of others can often cause you to change your actions. Sequelworthy… but I haven’t the time, nor the inspiration.