An Eye for an Eye

by RndDolph

BA-THOOM!!!
A bar of gold streaks the horizon in the blink of an eye, and with a thud and yellow spark, impacts a rolling Sherman. It continues a few yards then ceases. Instantly, a hatch flies open; grey smoke pouring out. Within the smoke, a dark figure appears, and like a fish on land, wriggles out. He hits the ground convulsing blood, with fleshy stumps.
BOOM !!
The tank blows its turret; shrapnel of, taking men who approach the stricken tanker.
“Bastards”, I think, tapping a fresh magazine against my helmet before inserting and cocking rifle. A vengeful syncopation of rifle pops and cracks respond, covering my advance through hedgerow.
I come upon a customer.
Kneeling before me is an enemy, tugging on his helmet in grief before a dead comrade. A twig snaps and he turns to look; we freeze, our eyes locked in stare.
My arms recoil, my rifle flinging hot brass case. Puffs of pink indicate hits as my victim turns with impact. He falls motionless, columns of dust rise around him and his comrade.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. An Eye for an Eye

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Amazing and intresting (good kind of intresting). I like how you add every detail of everything.

  2. An Eye for an Eye

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Present tense hurts here.
    Otherwise very good.

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