its now or never

by La bLaNqUiTa

This story has been marked as mature by the author. If you'd like to read it, sign in and make sure you've opted to view mature stories.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. its now or never

    `crayola.'s Buddy Icon `crayola.

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    you have what you want to say. this piece is really powerful. it’s wonderfully described, but i think it’s be better as a sonnet… but that’s just my opinion. great job, five stars.

  2. its now or never

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i love it. thats kinda how im feeling right now 5 *s

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!