Jenny, Listen

by .:band baby:.

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“No! It’s not true. Your lying to me. I talked to Dan yesterday. He seemed fine!”

No he didn’t though. He told me he loved me yesterday. I laughed it off saying ‘yeah okay.’ He had said “Seriously Jennifer, I do. Never forget that. Please. I love you and I’m sorry for hurting you.” I had replied, “You could never hurt me, but I love you too and you will always hold a place in my heart…

“Jenny, listen to me-”

“I can’t.” I broke down into my best friends’ arms. There was just no way he was right.. He must be mistaken. My best friend stood there holding me. He hadn’t and wouldn’t let go of me for a very long time. I needed time to process this, much as I didn’t want to. But no, I wouldn’t believe Dan had commited suicide.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Jenny, Listen

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 8 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    you. need. serious. proofreaders.
    really.

  2. Jenny, Listen

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 8 months ago

    I fixed some things. I wrote it kinda fast to show my other friend. If I missed something, please let me know. Thanks

  3. Jenny, Listen

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is sad but great intense dont worry about mistakes they are fixable great job :]

  4. Jenny, Listen

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love it! and Write is right, don’t worry about the mistakes.

  5. Jenny, Listen

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awwwwwwwwwww! this is soo sad=[

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