The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

by Hobo Beard Bob

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He realized, a little too late, that his partner was the villain.

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  1. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A good ending. Makes one think what would have preceded it.

  2. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Officially's Buddy Icon Officially

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It has a note of finality to it, which I like. Quite a few in the challenge do, but some are missing that. It leaves a whole story open, but it’s still somehow enough.

  3. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Metaphoric Spurs' Buddy Icon Metaphoric Spurs

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Has my vote thus far.

  4. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 8 months ago

    Haha, this, for some reason, made me laugh. It seems like a good introductory and conluding statement.

  5. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 8 months ago

    Foreboding music- duh duh DUH

    I laughed too.

  6. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars' Buddy Icon Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Fade to black, gunshot SFX , THE END .

  7. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 8 months ago

    I love this. LOVE this. It could also make for a great beginning. I sort of picture the “thinker” sitting in a cell/coffin/bottom of a well looking back on events that have already taken place.

  8. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hahahahahahaha I laughed. It’s aptly named. Great job.

  9. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol, this is hilarious! Great job!

  10. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So great, and surprisingly complete, for such a short sentence! Fabulous job!

  11. The Not-So-Great Detective {Minimum Length Challenge}

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 8 months ago

    Says so much with so little, and still manages to please.

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