Side Effects of Perfection

by Pockets

The problem was based on the ingenuity of the engineers of the past. John’s grandfather had figured out how to gather energy, but the issue of storing this energy was another matter. A partner of his, Gerald Pherman, determined that even a vast man-made battery could never store as much energy as was gathered. So he turned to the world’s largest electromagnet- the world itself. Not only would this store the energy, but it would also help in ambiently attracting the sun’s flares.

But he forgot about the next nearby electromagnet. The Moon also had a core rich in iron, and soon after the earth began storing energy, there was a noticeable change in the tides. The moon began looming closer, though it remained in orbit, and as such the tides swelled higher. Venice was frequently ten feet underwater, and the Statue of Liberty often appeared to be wading. The coasts were no longer safe. And the climate changed for the worse.

But worst of all, the moon would finally reach the earth in less than five years.

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  1. Side Effects of Perfection

    Shawn Powers' Buddy Icon Shawn Powers

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Well done, I think I’ll continue your train of thought. I’ll admit, ficlets are growing on me. :)

    I actually purposefully left most of the details wide open in the original, so as not to limit any possible sequels. Part of that was because I hadn’t thought that far ahead. Thanks for adding some meat to the story. Like I mentioned on the other ficlets you’ve written, well done.

  2. Side Effects of Perfection

    Dangerous Angels' Buddy Icon Dangerous Angels

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    nice job. love the title!!

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