the world outside of the box

by Dana ♥

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Getting away from inside the box
Almost there with all the locks
Nothing seems to be open.
Outside free
without reality
We can go
Anywhere.
We can cross an ocean on a ship
Make our lives somewhat a trip
fly a desert
Take a train
Follow the stars till we’re insane
Make the mountains all align
Make our notes all define
But this can’t happen unless
You get a job
Make some money
Sell your girlfriend
Make me your honney.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. the world outside of the box

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 10 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I rather like the beginning, regardless of your age(s).
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    The ending was a bit odd for me, and missing the whimsy from the beginning.
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    Other than that, I’m impressed you knew the word “align” when you were seven.

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