At Heaven's gate

by emma jo_234

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Once I knew—what my life was com-ing to…
Once I knew my place
And the-en I met you
All of a sudden the days

Chased me by, let me live
you put my life on hold…
And now we’re here to-ge-ther
at Heaven’s gate

Why didn’t I see
You had the be-est of me
And I’m tryin to live
while cooped up in this cage…

‘Cause time chased me by
and I let me live, though my
Life was on ho-old
And now we’re here to-ge-ther
a-at Hea-ven’s gate.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. At Heaven's gate

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 10 months ago

    It was supposed to be a song…that’s why there are italics in odd places and some words go “a-at,” for example.

  2. At Heaven's gate

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That’s beautiful. Yeah, I guessed it was a song even before the comment, because of the italics and stuff…I’ve never been able to write songs, so I have great respect for those who can.
    LoA

  3. At Heaven's gate

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 10 months ago

    Wow, I think that this is beautifully written. Well done!

  4. At Heaven's gate

    howhardlifeis' Buddy Icon howhardlifeis

    Posted 10 months ago

    very nice emma!!
    I was trying to sing it lol..but me trying to sing only ends up with one word…..Disaster!!

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