Start Over? More Like Game Over.

by &bryton

I hated this life. This life that was all so new. This new life that had just begun. This life that just so happened to be mine.

I stood on the cracked sidewalk that led all the way to my new house’s door step. It felt like my feet were immersed in freezing water since I wasn’t wearing shoes. The constant autumn breeze didn’t help much either. My shoulders were slouched, my head tilted slightly, my arms crossed over my chest, and a puzzled expression smacked onto my face. I didn’t understand much of what was going on at the moment. This house was more of a wobbly mansion that was about to tumble down like a castle built out of blocks by a toddler. This wasn’t like my parents. All of the windows were shattered with the exception of the one that had a baseball stuck right in the middle of it. I did, however, like one aspect of the exterior of my new residence. The door. It was a deep jade color that reminded me of the fresh grass back home. It was an emerald shining right in the middle of a pile of dirt.

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  1. Start Over? More Like Game Over.

    `crayola.'s Buddy Icon `crayola.

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i found you! i be `crayola. of EOE . lovely piece dear. so much visual! it’s captivating.

  2. Start Over? More Like Game Over.

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    I hated this life. This life that was all so new. This new life that had just begun. This life that just so happened to be mine. I love that!
    LoA

  3. Start Over? More Like Game Over.

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 10 months ago

    Captivating.

  4. Start Over? More Like Game Over.

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    Very interesting. Well told with plenty of detail and plenty of questions and possibilities.
    LoA

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