Purple Town House

by Apostrophe

“This is it!” Thora exclaimed. As she looked up at the tall purple painted, building.

I can feel a certain energy here that I have never felt before. She thought to herself.

“This building looks cool, it has an avant garde feel to it” Said her friend Chris.

As Thora looked at the building she imagined what life was like here. She had mental visions of living inside the dark purple house. She tried to imagine what the inside looked like. In her mind she saw hard wood floors and white walls with wood trim.

She saw a living room with an old fashioned fireplace. She imagined the room to be large and open with a lot of mid day sun playing off the walls.

She looked down to the first story level. As her mental pictures subsided she felt drawn to this place. Something intrigued her about this place.. She needed to find out what it was. She pulled out her note pad from pocket. And wrote down the address. She needed to move there somehow. She wanted to live in that house. She wanted those windows.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Purple Town House

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 10 months ago

    Sounds like a cool house.

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    JohnnysGiRL's Buddy Icon JohnnysGiRL

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very well written. I can picture everything you wrote

  3. Purple Town House

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    Your descriptions are awesome, i agree with Johnnysgirl, vivid imagery, I feel like i’m inside that house with the picture you conjure up. You’re one of the best when it comes to descriptions.
    Love how Thora feels drawn to the house.

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    Cat the Dancing Mouse's Buddy Icon Cat the Dancing Mouse

    Posted 10 months ago

    I agree with..well…everyone
    I love the impression given with Thora’s ideas and thoughts.
    You’re a great writer :)

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 10 months ago

    Great descriptions here, I will read on!

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