Inspiration

by Leave Me A Note

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The thought of giving up something that I loved made my heart sink. The thought of maybe giving up made me cry. The thought of losing everything I worked for that made me happy made me sink. The thought of stopping made me think, “Maybe I should just stop. Maybe I’m not good enough. Maybe I just can’t think of anything… or just can’t.”
This frustrated me and made me feel weak or like I was gasping for air.It was like my heart was pulled out and turned upsidedown.It killed me.
My mind just stopped.I tried to consentrate on everything I could do, but nothing came afoot.
I tried to avoid it,but my passion for it kept me going at even my most desperate attempts.Whenever I thought about it you could see my personality dampen and my expression and eyes grow weary.
To stop and think about something else to do was hard.But for some people its all the same.My feelings for this made me grow closer, but now I feel so far away.I reflect on nothing but becoming lonely. But I can do nothing for I have no inspiration.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Inspiration

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 10 months ago

    my only inspiration is to be soon getting my drivers license and getting the hell outta here. :DD

  2. Inspiration

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting. I love an internal struggle, I do. This one’s a little hard to understand. They’re supposed to be…for the character. He’s stuck in a rut…and he can’t get himself out because in thinking of something to get himself out, he would be?
    I’m sad that I don’t quite get it. So close, yet so far.
    AH! AWESOME ! You’ve conveyed what your character’s feeling to the reader! In a way all your own. Still, one who doesn’t enjoy analysation as much as I may not like this piece.

    LoA

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    Cat the Dancing Mouse's Buddy Icon Cat the Dancing Mouse

    Posted 10 months ago

    That was very, very, good. The internal struggle was very clear, and the universal themes are a good addition. Way to go! Five stars :)
    -Cat the Dancing Mouse

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 10 months ago

    Very good writing, I like the struggle. I hope someday he will get some inspiration, b/c life w/out inspiration is sad.

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