Fear

by Leave Me A Note

The fear of losing him was amazing. I wanted him to be there and when he was I felt loved. I felt protected. I felt cared about.
When he was gone I had a terrible feeling of pain and sorrow. That maybe he stopped caring about me. Maybe he wants nothing to do with me.
Everytime I would hear a story about our past or even think about him, I became depressed and then afraid.
To move on was like killing a part of me. But I knew I must. And I will.

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  1. Fear

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I hate how hard moving on is. You really know you should, but it’s just so much easier to dwell in the past.

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    Etsuko Sohma's Buddy Icon Etsuko Sohma

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    moving on is hard but itz worth it… ur luv wouldnt want u suffering for him/her. this is a gr8 moving on story~

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is beautifully written. I like how you ended with “and I will”. It was almost funny. Like that T-shirt that says “Procrastinators Unite! ...tomorrow.”

    LoA

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awww. This is sad but sweet too. Nice job.

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