The John (8)

by Freedom

John must of loved me enough because he left for rehab. Patrick must have loved me because we moved into his mom’s old apartment. John wasn’t happy about that, but then again, I was yet to see him happy. Ever. He left to go into the town and get help from some doctors. That is true love because he really does hate doctors, a thing we found we have in common. They were putting him through rehab and I loved him for that. I truly loved him for the first time. The downfall was that I had to stop calling him John. Oh well…here it goes. I hope I can do this. I shouldn’t be too hard. Love was real harder though compared to this. God, I sound so stupid. This should be easy. Ok here goes nothing…Dad.

Woah.

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh…
    I get it now…That makes a lot more sense!
    GREAT STORY ! 500000 stars! Absolutely Fantastic. Your plot was wonderful; the whole language superb. Way to go!

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    Posted 8 months ago

    thanks glad you liked it

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, this was a really good series. It kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Awesome job!!!

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh my oh my oh my that was AWESOME !!!!! 233351238573495times10tothe24052340958power stars!!!!!

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