One word.

by undone

Why is it so far away?

One word,
can break me apart,
chip me down,
skinny.

Why is the light always on the other side?
But what I wonder the most
is why am I always
on the dark one
even when I’m trying to
run away,
desperately away
from the shadow
into
that word,
that one word
that will never be mime.

One day,
I say,
I will be able to,
finally,
successfully,
run away.

But until that day,
I will always keep
that
word in mind…

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. One word.

    Cat the Dancing Mouse's Buddy Icon Cat the Dancing Mouse

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg I know exactly where you are coming from…I solved it though. And the answer is NOT anorexia. Don’t try it. It actually makes you fatter.
    Great job. You captured the feeling perfectly. Five stars :)
    xox—Cat the Dancing Mouse

  2. One word.

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 8 months ago

    That was amazing, but i totally agree with cat the dancing mouse. don’t try anorexia or bulemia, it just makes u fatter and messes u up. and i loveyour profile. i love food!!

  3. One word.

    undone's Buddy Icon undone

    Posted 8 months ago

    thank you guys for liking my poem,
    but just in case you guys don’t know, I just wrote the poem, in other words, the poem doesn’t relate to me. As in, I’m not trying or suffering from anything. Just saying cause I don’t want everyone to pity me when you don’t really need to. I like food, okay!

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