Ficlets

Part 1. The Epic Begins

The snow fell constantly on the Diamond Coast region, but mysteriously never acumulated to more the 6 inches. It coated the forrests of evergreens that grew in this region, giving it the picturesque look of a winter wonderland, but the beauty of the landscape hid the the regions true nature.

With very few perminant inhabitants, it was a quiet and lonely place. Those that did call the Diamond Coast home, were elemental beasts, hidden in the trees, ground, and stones. It was a dangerous place to be on any occasion.

Amid the green and white towers that were the pines, stood a single manor, also draped in shimmering snow. The mansion stood as quiet as the trees themselves, sourrounded by a cobble stone fence, disconnected only at one point by a large black gate. At the top of the gate, the thick metle bars twisted, forming a name.

“ LIM BALDWIN “

The manor appeared, hidden in the Diamond Coast, by unknown forces, and remained uninhabited for unkown years, until the children came.

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Part 1. The Epic Begins
SKermitgorf
Posted 7 months ago

uh oh, what will the children find?
You paint a vivid description.
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RunningWithScissors
Posted 7 months ago

i cann see clearrly noww :]
hehee. anyways. excellent descriptions.
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Mask By The Moon
Posted 7 months ago

you have some spelling errors, please correct them.
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Pai Mei
Posted 7 months ago

Sorry mask, didnt know ficlets was a spelling test!

Next time send me a note, about my grammer. I believe these comments should be about the story, I didnt write this to see what you think about my spelling.
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Richard Peck
Posted 7 months ago

You do paint a beautiful picture. I cant wait to see where this goes.

Nice Icon btw! Well, i guess typing in “Moon” on the icon page isnt that wierd at all!