She stood there, replaying that moment in time: when he step out of the car, grabbed that woman’s hand, said I’m sorry, and ran into the house. One single tear drop fell from her eye. With a disdain facial expression on her face she turned to her house. She walked up to her red painted door, & make one final glance at Trevor’s house.
“Trevor” she whispered as she push the door opened.
“HAPPY NEW YEAR DENISE !!” screamed her mom’s guest. Denise hiding her sorrow, tried her best to be happy & celebrate with the other guest. Later on that night, around 3am, Denise was in her room, lying awake in her bed, dropping her tears into a bottle when she glanced across the street to Trevor’s window.
She saw the woman, sleep in his bed, while he was getting dressed. Wait, is he getting dress? she thought. He slipped on some shoes and left the room. 5 minutes later Denise saw him leaving his house & walking over to her house. She jumped onto the floor when she heard rocks being thrown at her window.
“Denise, I need u”
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She stood there, as the streets started to become quiet. She stared at the beautiful dark blue moonlight sky. Denise ki…A sequel to New Years' Eve Choice
About the author
Mr Reeses
Philadelphia
My name is Detre, also known as Mr Reeses, and I like to write. Currently I resided in Philly and I’m a sophmore in college. I love to write and express my feelings down on paper and in playing the flugehorn (the grandfather of the trumpet)
I like to write stories about romance, relationships, emotion, drama and feelings. From different points of views and different experiences. I can take critism, good or bad, cause I always want to improve.
Tell me what you think about my writings, so that I can improve and send me a note if you write a prequel or a sequel to one of my writings. Thanks alot
I have a couple of new characters in my random stories that I like to put out there so I have a new JD Series which are stories that star John and Denise. Now the series doesnt go in order.
A little something about John & Denise: They both are athletes, very toned with their bodies. I like interracial couples so John is a caucasian male and Denise is african american woman. I do want to stress that I dont want to make Denise the stereotypical black woman but she has her times as anyone else does.They have been together intimately for a year while been friends for more than five years so…. A lot of people like when I write stories about them so I have been. So I introduce to you the JD Series.
Some Chapters of the JD Series:
The Bestfriend Chapters- (3 ficlets)
http://ficlets.com/stories/4528
The Raw Chapters- (3 ficlets)
http://ficlets.com/stories/10221
The Lock Chapters (31 ficlets)
http://ficlets.com/stories/8592
Of Course they are others, just random ones, they have (JD Series) with the title. Unfort. their chapters arent named.
And now to switch it up, so you wont get tired of John and Denise’s characters, I have a new series that I’m writing entitled the LA Series, who introduces a freshman in college, Andi and her bestfriend Laura Ann,
a super-senior in the same college whom are roommates in school. Andi, a small town woman experiences a big city college scene and the twin of Denise, Laura Ann balances her career, and she’s in school studying for her masters degree but can she handle a relationship too?. Hope you like. Enjoy.
One of my newest stories begins with story lines, which relate to the holidays, starting with New Years’ Eve. When I first started this story, it was supposed to be like 6 ficlets but I let my imagination run, and I have written alot. So check it out, you might like this storyline, it portrays to a younger Denise, before she met John, and when she was a college student. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it:
The Holiday Chapters (45 Ficlets)
http://ficlets.com/stories/17496
Published on January 05, 2008.
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