Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

by .:band baby:.

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Every night
before she sleeps,
she kneels on her bed
and looks out her window.

She kisses the sky,
and whispers these words:
“I am waiting for you”

Then she lays in bed
and says her prayers,
but before she sleeps
she thinks of him.

In her dreams
he is always there.
He never leaves,
and always cares.

She misses him,
to her he’s real.
Him she’ll always love,
unwavering and true.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

    QUIS's Buddy Icon QUIS

    Posted 11 months ago

    Thats pretty cool,its kinda like a poem about a girl longing for LOVE . I really like it though.

  2. Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

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    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    For just an attempt at poetry, I’d say this is pretty awesome! Just the right amount of sadness and longing, and the words flow pretty well…I really like it!
    LoA

  3. Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 10 months ago

    you call that an attempt? I call it a success!

  4. Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ha, I agree with Celestic. This is so pretty. I love it.

  5. Waiting for Love ((My Attempt at Poetry..))

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    Posted 10 months ago

    I agree with Celestic too, total success!

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