Almost

by Frostbite

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They had talked but never spoken,
seen but never heard,
times when thoughts subconsciously,
surrounded every word.

Listless eyes pan across the space,
seen so many times,
but theres something he just can’t erase,
hidden in those rhymes.

So again he’ll sit and rest,
as the words pass in their way,
wonder when the time is best,
and if that day’s today.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Almost

    Frostbite's Buddy Icon Frostbite

    Posted 7 months ago

    It doesn’t make much sense really, but it almost does, hence the name. Theres a loose connection between verses, and interpretation is left to the creative :P

  2. Almost

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 7 months ago

    I like this ALOT J . It does make some kind of sence. You really need to write more. your really good.

  3. Almost

    David B's Buddy Icon David B

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice work. hints at meaning and depth. Its a tease. I feel used by your poetry. Nice.

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