Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

by .:band baby:.

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The sand was warm beneath my toes. A cool breeze blew in off the ocean, playing with my hair. The salt-water was drying on my sun-kissed skin. A smile was permanently stuck to my lips thanks to the gorgeous boy walking next to me.

We stopped walking and he hugged me. He leaned down and kissed me, gently and soft. We stood there in each others embrace for a long time, our shadows growing longer and longer by the second as the sun sank below the horizon.

This wasn’t the only time he and I had been out here like this. We came out here often. This was our ‘spot.’ Things had went like any other night. But this night was special, different somehow.

As the last of the sun was above the ocean line, he pulled away from me. He looked scared and vounerable. I was nervous. Then he pulled sometihng out of his pocket. A small box. He looked at it, turning it round and round with his hands. Then he slowly got down on one knee. He looked up and me and said the words I had been secretly dying to hear.

“Marry me?”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 9 months ago

    WOOOOW !
    what a great way to do the challenge!

  2. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Man normally I hate stuff like this, but this is an exception.

  3. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 8 months ago

    Wow, this is awesome!

  4. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 8 months ago

    wait they dont kiss?

  5. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 8 months ago

    They do kiss ealy on. And this is more of a scene rather then just a kiss.
    LoA

  6. Sunset at the Beach ((Hardtoexplainmyownfeelins Kiss Challenge))

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 8 months ago

    b-e-a-utiful. I love how you described the landscape.

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