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Giving up

by Gerr Bear :]

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giving up,
letting go,
something we want to know,
caring so much,
wondering which way is right,
we have to hold on tight,
were going on a ride,
a ride to save our life,
we cant let go,
we want to though,
almost done,
all we want to do is run,
it was part of me,
part of something ill always be.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Giving up

    kells' Buddy Icon kells

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    so short, but yet you managed to convey so much into it. Fantastic! =)

  2. Giving up

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow! gerr u r like the poet master!!

  3. Giving up

    DOGScare Me JK's Buddy Icon DOGScare Me JK

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thats really good
    its like a poem about the way life is sorta i think
    idk…lol i’m just saying its good
    haha
    ps – i didn’t know u had a ficlets! u shuda told me! =)

  4. Giving up

    Blair's Buddy Icon Blair

    Posted 10 months ago

    woww, and you say i’m good? have you read your own stuff?

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