The Sounds of Her Lullaby (ending)

by heartbeats echocho

Now you might wonder why, but Jesus, He knew about her lullaby.

The sound of tears, of sobs, of fears.
The sound of silent screams, of pleads.
The sound you might not ever hear,
The sound forever in my ear.
These, are the sounds of my lullaby…

I wrote this poem last year, it’s sorta my first big…anything. It’s my baby in a kind of way. So help me be a better…parent?...lol by telling me it sucks, or it’s lame, or whateva : ]- ....

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Sounds of Her Lullaby (ending)

    Snarky's Buddy Icon Snarky

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I kinda like it actually. Its got real passion. Gives me the willys actually.

  2. The Sounds of Her Lullaby (ending)

    Overlooked_Merchandise's Buddy Icon Overlooked_Merchandise

    Posted 6 months ago

    it’s really good, very deep. almost lik it really happened, almost lik how a song tells a story. it sounds a lot lik a longer version of a song to tell you the truth. i absolutley love it!! keep writing!

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