Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

by Alexis DeHearts

“Alright, class, sit down!” Mr. Bright called the class of rambuncous 11th graders to their seats. He turned to the black board and wrote the days assignment on it. Turning back to the class, he tapped the board with his chalk.
“Tell me about something you cherish,” he said. Tossing the chalk behind him and, as usual, yet no less miraculously, it hit the black board and fell right into place beneath it.
“It could be a book, a peice of jewely, a family member,” the sandy haired teacher took long strides through the rows as he spoke to his pupils. “Or even your special someone.”
Scattered giggles greeted this comment as Mr. Bright returned to his desk. He picked up his timer and set it.
“You have… five minutes. Begin.”
The writers didn’t need to be told twice. Immedeatly pencils were darting across the page, lead and ink portraying the things the young adults held dear to their hearts.
Only one girl hadn’t written a word yet. It was too difficult to choose- Mr. Bright… or their engagement ring?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 7 months ago

    Cute. A girl’s crush on her teacher. For a minute I thought it might be the other way around. :)

  2. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 7 months ago

    Thank you, but I’d say yours is more original than mine.

  3. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This guy sounds like one of my high school teachers. Very descriptive and easy to relate to. Very nice. However…is she engaged to the teacher? That’s what it seems like. Which would be complicated.

    LoA

  4. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Never mind. I just read the guide lines of the challenge. I still like the piece.
    LoA

  5. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ah, ok. Thanks

  6. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really liked this! Nice job on the challenge.
    LoA

  7. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 7 months ago

    nverr had a crush on my teachers, but then they were nuns and priests…

  8. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    `crayola.'s Buddy Icon `crayola.

    Posted 7 months ago

    ah, i really like it. originally i thought you wrote eleven year olds and was a bit shocked but then i saw it was eleventh graders and relaxed. a bit controversial but that’s what makes it unique. thanks for entering, and great job.

  9. Unique Love Story: Something Cherished (Challenge)

    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 7 months ago

    haha. Yes, that would be creepy if it was eleven year olds… And thank you very much.

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