Time for a Story of Returning

by THX 0477

Felicia’s sleep, generally speaking, is as peaceful as her lolling smile while awake. But on that night, a night softly hushed by a smattering of rain, she awoke quite suddenly. I only knew this because she stirred, a frail hand gripping the sheet.

“Eric,” she whispered reverently. Slowly, methodically with the practiced movements of a woman long slowed by time’s cruel hand, Felicia sat up in bed. Her pale, emaciated legs swung over the side towards me. Her eyes fixed on me, gently with no malice nor malevolence.

“Felicia,” I said softly, in my best nurse’s voice, “Why are you up, dear? Lay back down. Sleep. Here, let me…”

“Tsk, tsk,” she cut me off sweetly, “Eric will not abide a lazy welcome. He comes. He comes tonight.”

“Eric?” I asked, starting to fumble with the sheets, “Is he one of your sons who visit?”

She smiled, apparently amused by my question, “Deary, let me tell you a story. On a night much like this, seventy years ago I met a man, an extraordinary man. Tonight he returns.”

Comments

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  1. Time for a Story of Returning

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh my! A vampire? An angel? Something else?
    This really catches a reader’s curiosity.

  2. Time for a Story of Returning

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 5 months ago

    Ooh! You could catch the mysticism and magic in the air, stuff it in a jar, and light up that dark little room like it was day. Quite good.

    LoA

  3. Time for a Story of Returning

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like where you’ve taken the story. I’m curious to read more!

  4. Time for a Story of Returning

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 5 months ago

    Fascinating! Mysterious! She needs to prepare for him, I think. ;)

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