Constructive criticism please! Your thoughts are very much appreciated! Thank you.

That was good. Least I thought so.. But I don;t know much about poetry.. hmm.. well i still think it’s good none-the-less.
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Awesome Emily Dickinson qoute… now let me read your poem.

I mean *quote

I LOVE IT ! Way to depict the internal struggle we all face at one point in our lives. A very non-angsty, grown-up, intelligent way to portray adolescence. Kudos for that! The world needs more!

Very well done!
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thought provoking, especially as I tried to decipher some of your images as they pertain to my perspective. Hope that makes some sense. good Job.

Thank you all for your positive comments. I just recently showed this poem to a friend, and she merely laughed at it and said it was good for “beginners”.

Your positive feedback made my day. ♥