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love is blind

ever since the day, I knew what love really was, love has been real blind to me. sometimes, acutally all the time, whatever i think is right , is usually so wrong for me. my mind tells me yes, my heart tells me yes, but my soul tells me no. every time the moon shines i think of you, every time the rain drops, i still think of you, when i see the bright sun shinin’ in my window, i think of you even more. your face is forever engraved in my heart, and I have only met you once. I just can’t seem to turn you off , in my mind all I see is you, all I breathe is you, all I dream of is you. from the first time you looked at me, i was completely hypnotized by your gorgeous green eyes. And your voice, made my knees go weak. love is blinded, in my mind , all the time. But hopefully this time , you can be the one. I have been waiting and longing for someone who will understand me and my sensitivity. Are you that person, or once again have I been fooled by my heart? will I ever know what is right or what is wrong, stay.

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love is blind
emma jo_234
Posted 8 months ago

This is very sweet and sad, but reading would be much easier if you indented and captialized.
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Emotes
Posted 8 months ago

That was so sweet but mournful….nice combination of both.
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Storykeeper of Fae
Posted 8 months ago

This needs work with conventions, but I know precisely what you mean. I felt that exact same way about someone a long time ago. I discovered by getting to know him better that I’d better be more careful what I wish for. Sometimes, having someone to understand me completely is scary. Especially when I feel I can’t return the favor as readily. The person will come into your life when it’s right. He may even already be there. Just be aware.
LoA
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Living In Wonder Land ♠
Posted 8 months ago

Wow, I have been thinking about how love is blind and is seen not through a persons eyes but through there mind and then i find this story. I love it so much
5stars