The Black Iris (part 3)

by A Joker

As James continued along the stream, a large flowerbed of Iris’s caught his eye. He’d seen Iris cluster’s growing from streambeds before, but never so many in one place. The flowerbed led him to the doorway of the old mansion, where he slowly creaked open the door and entered.

James had always been a quiet individual, but nothing frightened him. He believed this was because he himself was somewhat frightening, with his pale skin and his penchant for wearing dark colors.

The house was large and dimly lit. If it weren’t for the holes in the roof and the full moon shining brightly overhead, he wouldn’t have been able to see a thing. James looked around inquisitively and gradually made his way to the staircase. Clouds of dust shot out with every step he took as he ascended to the second floor.

At long last he reached the top of the winding stairs. James could hardly believe his eyes, as the second floor was covered entirely in Iris’s. It was breathtaking. And there in the center, grew a single black Iris.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Black Iris (part 3)

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 7 months ago

    Ooo, nice symbolism. I like how he’s happening upon himself in a way. However, please watch your use of apostrophes. You still get 5 stars for the imagery.
    LoA

  2. The Black Iris (part 3)

    Emotes' Buddy Icon Emotes

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love how you made the mansion, with the dust clouds. 2 thumbs up!

  3. The Black Iris (part 3)

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted 7 months ago

    This is really good. Remember us small people when your a famous author. lol. BTW , I love the name of this story.

  4. The Black Iris (part 3)

    Luuvvxiz_90's Buddy Icon Luuvvxiz_90

    Posted 6 months ago

    i love stairways your not to sure were they are headed till you get to the top. i like the winding ones.
    waiting….on the first step…

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