Broken in Two

by Bigkittyproductions

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“Greg,”she said as she leaned over the table towards me, “It’s over…I—-I’m sorry.” She picked up her red leather coat and left. I never saw her again. I sat there and thought. I had never felt this way after another girl had broken up with me.Crack. I picked up my trench coat quietly and stepped outside into the frigid winter air. I shuffled down sidewalk staring at my feet. I couldn’t stop thinking about her. I remembered when we had become lab partners in college.Crack. I remembered her expression when I had thrown her that surprise 22nd birthday.Crack I remembered the sweet-smelling homemade dinners.Crack. All these memories were worthless and evil now. I entered the key into the locked door. It reminded me about the time she had “accidently” locked me in the bathroom closet. As I entered the small apartment I noticed she had left some of her things out. A warm tear trickled down my cold cheek. I had loved her but she hadn’t loved me. Snap

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  2. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  3. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  4. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  5. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  6. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  7. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  8. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    his heart was cracking then it snapped

  9. Broken in Two

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    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I think we get it, Mr. Champ, sir.

    Nice ficlet anyway…very out of style for you, but I like it.

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