The Grass is Greener

by StrugglingWriter

“High School Algebra?” I said, gathering the few rational brain cells remaining in my blubbering skull. “That must’ve been a long ago.”

“Oh, no,” she said, flashing that smile that reinforced faith in this world. “It was only last year, but don’t worry, I kicked Rick out months ago. How old are you?”

“Twenty..ugh..three,” I replied, hoping she hadn’t noticed my hairline that had just recently begun to abandon my forehead for the greener pastures of the back of my head. “New topic,” I thought to myself.

“You hear the new Killers record?” I said, having read Rolling Stone that morning.

“I downloaded it and it was OK I guess.” said Carolina. “Look, things are dead here and I was thinking about closing early. Wanna come back to my place?”

As she said this, she briefly touched my hand. Even if I wanted to say no, I don’t think I would’ve been able. If I hadn’t been so enamored with her, I would’ve noticed this same scene had played out many times before, though I had seen less of the regulars lately.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Grass is Greener

    PixelFish's Buddy Icon PixelFish

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the hint that this is old hat to her….I wonder it what it means for our haplessly smitten narrator.

  2. The Grass is Greener

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Ditto that, PixelFish.
    Plus, I’m now wondering if she’s legal!

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!