Elevator III: The Completed Trilogy

by Darvin Dundragon

“Whoa! Oh. Oh, I see. The floor is a window and… Wow, are we high up!”

“Egh.”

“Now the walls are becoming windows! Oh man, look at that view! Glad we’re on the side of the building and not in middle, don’t ya agree, T?”

“I… I did not notice those viewscreens when we entered.”

“Viewscreens? You mean the windows.”

“Er, yes, the ‘windows’.”

“You were scared pretty bad there for a moment.”

“I most certainly was not.”

“Heh heh, you should have seen the look on your face!”

“Quiet, D.”

“It was all, ‘Oh no! We’re gonna die!’ haha!”

“Stop.”

“No so high and mighty now are you? ‘Use your brain like me! I am T and I am so great! Nothing can get to me… Help we’ve been tricked!’ eheh.”

“I said shut up, you insolent cretin! I am already regretting bringing you despite the fact that you have a desirable skill with persuasion. Watch your back after this because I WILL KILL YOU !”

“Gentlemen, please. Calm yourselves. Step into my office and we can begin the negotiations.”

The elevator had arrived.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Elevator III: The Completed Trilogy

    Darvin Dundragon's Buddy Icon Darvin Dundragon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    This was an experiment with dialogue and a writing challenge from a community I am part of on LiveJournal. You guys can continue the story if you like, but I’m done.

    I hope everyone enjoyed reading it :)

  2. Elevator III: The Completed Trilogy

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I liked the way it was all mostly dialogue, but you could still tell exactly what happened, and the differences between the two characters.

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