animal party (rhyming challenge)

by yoITSme

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The dog barked twice
Then came the mice

The duck quaked
That is a fact

The beavers chewed some wood
Who knew they could

The goose laid an egg
Then fell on her leg

All the animals rushed
The rat got crushed

Where are they going
Why is the crow crowing

Its an animal party
I bet the food will be hearty

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. animal party (rhyming challenge)

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    LOLLL !
    this was awesomme=]

  2. animal party (rhyming challenge)

    White Hat's Buddy Icon White Hat

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Maybe even an Animalist party?
    In the spirit of Animal Farm?

  3. animal party (rhyming challenge)

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha. I laughed reading this one! good job.
    LoA

  4. animal party (rhyming challenge)

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 8 months ago

    Hahaha, this is funny.

  5. animal party (rhyming challenge)

    yoITSme's Buddy Icon yoITSme

    Posted 8 months ago

    haha we just finished reading animal farm at school thats wat gave me the idea

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