Both of us!?

by Never Explain

“What?” She said.
“Why are you leaving?” I said as her eyes locked into mine.
“It’s complicated. It’s-”
“Is it me?”
There was a short silence, and then she answered.
“It’s both of you.” She said pointing a finger at me, then at Matt.
Matt and i raised eyebrows at each other, then listened to Mel.
“I think I like both of you.”
“But Mel-”
“I think I should try to date both of you.”
What!?” Matt and I said simultaneously.
“Yes, and whoever I like more gets to have me as their girlfriend.”
“Mel!? That’s crazy, I had you first-”
“You think I_ like this?!” Mel exclaimed. “I just have to find out for myself.”
“Go out with me.” Matt said.
Now it was Mel’s turn to raise eyebrows.
“Sure.”
_This is so screwed up i can’t even begin to describe it.

Comments

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  1. Both of us!?

    LeAnn717's Buddy Icon LeAnn717

    Posted 8 months ago

    thats a mess with the italics… and the plot, WOW , that is screwed up

  2. Both of us!?

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow this is…um wow =D ur a great writer

  3. Both of us!?

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    please please sequel i love this series!

  4. Both of us!?

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I am thinking Matt’s eyes have something to do with this?

  5. Both of us!?

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    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Dreamer. I want to know what was up with him like.. I don’t know.. controling things and people?
    LoA

  6. Both of us!?

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 6 months ago

    ah!?! i can’t begin to describe how much i love this series!

  7. Both of us!?

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    isn’t Matt in the sixth grade??

  8. Both of us!?

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh yeah, he’s a genius (forgot) but he’s still the age of a sixth grader – isn’t he?

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