The Perfect Face

by Bartimaeus

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I was walking down the hallway to my 2nd period class.
I looked up to the clock, then at the line of passing people to the left of the hallway. I looked at all their faces. Some happy, some sad, some unreadable.
Then, i saw her face…
God… It was so perfect… i could’ve painted a mona lisa in that moment that seemed to last forever…
I catch her eyes, God… those two beautiful pools of sky blue… she smiles softly at me, and I feel warmth rush through my body… her brownish blonde angel hair hanging in curls to her shoulders… her lips… completely flawless… no cracks or blemishes… her skin unscathed like a baby’s… her face seemed to shine above all others… the beauty I long to call mine… the hair i long to run my fingers through… the lips I long to kiss… her heart who’s I desire above anyone else’s… Is it for me…? I sit here, and it all seemed so long ago…
I smile… “Yes it is.” I say to myself, and i couldn’t be happier…

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Perfect Face

    Alexis DeHearts' Buddy Icon Alexis DeHearts

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow! This is a really good description of the girls beauty, especcially that it may be slightly exagerated by the persons personal feelings.

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awesome description. can’t wait to see if there’s more

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh oh! please do continue :3 i can’t wait
    im a sucker for romance X3

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, what a great description.

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 7 months ago

    This is a good story to follow with the old line “Beauty is in the eye of the beholder” only because he felt her beauty is for him. Maybe someone else would not see her that way.

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    iluvolixx3's Buddy Icon iluvolixx3

    Posted 6 months ago

    oh wow, is this about a reall girl? if so whats her name? i wish i had a guy to right about me like this, whoever she is she is sure lucky.

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 6 months ago

    Yea… her name’s Emily

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    iluvolixx3's Buddy Icon iluvolixx3

    Posted 6 months ago

    wow Emily is really lucky.

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 6 months ago

    yea, most people don’t know me that well, and don’t know how good i can be, but she did…

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    iluvolixx3's Buddy Icon iluvolixx3

    Posted 6 months ago

    aww that so sweet. i wish i had someone like you. my bf Spencer dumped me on tuesday. =’(

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 6 months ago

    lol, im just a classic romeo… love notes, poems, the whole nine yards. Most guys don’t want love, and ive had a few try to talk me into dumping her, but i never did =P

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    iluvolixx3's Buddy Icon iluvolixx3

    Posted 6 months ago

    aww how long have u been together?

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 6 months ago

    tres months, and we recently broke up. all im going to say.

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    ♥Reel_Nice♥'s Buddy Icon ♥Reel_Nice♥

    Posted 6 months ago

    hello tom, this is your crazy stalker person. i love this story, i actually love all the stories that are about me/ feature my name. lol ttyl!

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 6 months ago

    Here to corrupt the minds of these good people, are we? just keep your venting to yourself from now on, b/c some of us actually care =P

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