The Decision of Battle

by flute faerie

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That’s when I had to make a split decision. Not a very good place to think, that I was sure of, but it had to be done. As soon as the Captain had left, I went to the kitchen. I then took a knife from the cupboard and cut my hair so short that I appeared to be a boy. Which was exactly what I was aiming for. All my life I had been nothing, and now I had a chance to…yes, I will fight.

At that precise moment, a cannonball flew two feet beside me and into the table. Stepping out of the kitchen, I looked onto the deck to see that we were winning. Barely. Looking around, I saw this would be harder than I thought. As I was pondering where to begin, I heard a soft melodic voice behind me.

“Gloria?” It breathed.

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  1. The Decision of Battle

    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ooh write more, please! i want to know what happens! please please!

    kk, now that the begging is done: AMAZING . I want to know what happens. Nice “shocker” start. Has me gripped. keep going!

  2. The Decision of Battle

    Emotes' Buddy Icon Emotes

    Posted 8 months ago

    That was good ri9ght in the beggining it sweeps you in the story! Please do write more!

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nice!! sequel pleasssseeeeeeeee! PLEASE , or I kill you! ( lol Achmed, You should watch that video.)

  4. The Decision of Battle

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    Ooh, quick pace and then a bit of ‘uh oh’ right there at the end. Great job taking the story in yet another direction.
    LoA

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 8 months ago

    Cool! I love this! I agree, write more!

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